Sometimes the first glaze firing is pretty good. I think it needs more...but I always do. :) These pieces seem so dark I thought a lighter title might help. The other option is Waving Not Drowning which is also a poem by Stevie Smith. http://www.artofeurope.com/smith/smi1.htm (thanks to Emily Santiago for the poem reference) I am thinking about what the third piece will be. I like to work in series of 3. Life perservers, tornados, and ?